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Robin LaVoie's avatar

I am loving this story and this chapter kicked it up a notch. I love the way you are able to give me the sense of a place, I can see and feel it along with the characters. I love the spectacle they’ve come up with - and of course I really also want to know what Clem lost. So good.

Julie Gabrielli's avatar

“Someone who likes the long way into a story” is just a perfect description of the experience thus far. It’s a treat to be introduced to a new character with such firm, confident brushstrokes. And to see Kelly’s art through new eyes, albeit influenced by the whole mysterious setup to his viewing. Part film noir, part psychological thriller, the cinematic tone is working well. Clem is hooked!

Also, this made me LOL: “I can barely draw a square if you gave me three sides to start.” ☺️

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