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May 1Liked by Ben Wakeman

Ugh, if Fitzpatrick kills Jayden Iā€™m never using ChatGPT again šŸ˜”

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All will be revealed next week! Believe it or not, my aim was not to test the resolve of the queen of death and birds. šŸ˜‰

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Haha, sometimes I wonder, Ben! Sometimes I wonderā€¦

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May 6Liked by Ben Wakeman

Iā€™m still really loving the audio version, Ben. Itā€™s wild how youā€™re playing every part in this drama, yet all of the characters feel so distinct and unique to me. And when the theme song comes on, Iā€™m conditioned in the same Pavlovian way one might feel about a favorite television series. Itā€™s like oh yeahā€”Letā€™s Go!!! šŸ˜†

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Thanks so much, Ann! Voicing these characters each week has been both challenging and something I look forward to, so Iā€™m glad itā€™s working for you.

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May 3Liked by Ben Wakeman

It is a little ironic that you're encouraging us to give AI a looksee but both of your last two books feature evil AIs, Ben... šŸ˜‚ Great episode!

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Oh, Iā€™m fully aware of my massive contradictions! The way I see it, Iā€™m providing a service. Microdose LLMs now to inoculate you for the AI apocalypse!

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May 2Liked by Ben Wakeman

You make apocalypse-by-AI seem all too plausible Ben. Iā€™m riding a buggy back to the 1800ā€™sā€¦hope to see you and the Substack gang there with quill pens and blotting paper.

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Thanks Kim, my next book will be about the perils of parchment and quills. Bird flu!

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I knew it was going to end before we knew the fate of the four in the house. And still I was like, how can I wait a week?! Brilliant as ever!

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Thanks Holly!

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May 1Liked by Ben Wakeman

Hoooooo boy! Sheeeet. Things getting serious.

You delivered that part with Jayden so perfectly.

And the reaction from Scott!! Haha. Often I can find people's reactions in books a little unrealistic, but this was bang on perfect! All kinds of fuck-level appropriate reaction from Scott. šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘

The crescendo to the finish is real, Ben! I can feel it.

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Itā€™s true, my love affair with the F-bomb is no longer a secret. According to someone whose stack I read yesterday, using profanity makes me an amateur writer. On the upside, my books will never be optioned by Disney!

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May 1Liked by Ben Wakeman

I find that such BS. Listen to your average conversation and the f bomb is everywhere. If you're going for realism in our society, then you can afford to slide in some Fs. Some people use it for deliberate effect and it fails, but when used in a genuine response (as per Scott) then it totally works.

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You'll get a kick out of the note I just posted! I have managed to break AI down. It's given up trying to fix my foul mouth.

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This keeps getting curiouser and curiouser...

You've got me engaged.

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Thanks Chip! Glad youā€™re engaged. Weā€™re almost to the end of my tale.

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Yikes!! Another great episode! When Jayden got sleepy, I had the thought that they were in danger. With the systems shut down and no air circulation, not a good situation. But Iā€™m nervous now because surely Fitzgerald knows Scott logged in at the command center, etc. the clock is ticking!! Classic thriller move. šŸ˜Š

I have to ask - how *fun* was it to say the f-word a bunch of times for the audio? šŸ˜‰

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I confess, I have an undying love for the word. As I was typesetting "The Memory of My Shadow" I saw just how many times I used it - the count was 118. It is a satisfying word.

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Truly. A day doesnā€™t go by . . . I do have to watch myself around my students tho - donā€™t want to be too unprofessional.

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