Things are really picking up! All the characters are involved, which makes the story really dynamic. There's no guessing where the story goes from here.
Ben, thank you for a good long juicy episode! I look forward to Schulz’s reaction, half expecting him to welcome the added attention the videos will surely draw to the game. No such thing as bad publicity, right? 😱😭 As usual, your POV choices worked well.
This episode of Harmony House is a real nail-biter! 😬 The tension keeps mounting as Jessie and Deepu are in a perilous situation, and now the Jenson brothers and the remaining contestants are caught up in it too. Kudos to you for crafting such a gripping story with believable characters and unexpected twists. I'm totally hooked and can't wait to see how it all unfolds! 📺🔍
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On the edge of my seat with this one. I need to put my phone down and take a quaalude. How do you do it Ben?! Such riveting storytelling, every.damn.time.
Definitely three clicks higher on the tension dial - tortured AND killed? Now I'm really getting worried, Scott and Chris don't seem like they've always got the contestants best interests at heart, and I'm still suspicious of Schultz... Meanwhile, where's Evangeline???
I know, right? Stakes are a lot higher than the chance to win a fancy trailer that composts your poop. Eve shows up next week, not to worry. Thanks for reading, Troy.
Oh boy, I really need Jessie to be ok so that he and Jayden can have a happy ending and Cam can officiate their wedding and Riley can be ring-bearer / head of security.
Great episode, Ben. Never could have imagined that this would be where we’d end up, but I love it...
I’ll do my best to make all of your wishes come true but I can’t make any promises. 😉As always, thanks so much for tuning in and giving your kind feedback.
Another awesome episode, Ben. Loved getting the multiple scenes here of Scott and Chris and then back at the house, then the finding of Jessie's phone. Brilliantly done. Tension builds. What's going to happen?? *Bites nails*
Things are really picking up! All the characters are involved, which makes the story really dynamic. There's no guessing where the story goes from here.
Thanks, Chip. Glad you’re enjoying the story.
Ben, thank you for a good long juicy episode! I look forward to Schulz’s reaction, half expecting him to welcome the added attention the videos will surely draw to the game. No such thing as bad publicity, right? 😱😭 As usual, your POV choices worked well.
Thanks so much, Julie. We’ll get to catch up with Schultz next week. He has a lot of feelings about what’s gone down.
Oh! He *has* feelings?? The surprises just keep coming!
This episode of Harmony House is a real nail-biter! 😬 The tension keeps mounting as Jessie and Deepu are in a perilous situation, and now the Jenson brothers and the remaining contestants are caught up in it too. Kudos to you for crafting such a gripping story with believable characters and unexpected twists. I'm totally hooked and can't wait to see how it all unfolds! 📺🔍
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On the edge of my seat with this one. I need to put my phone down and take a quaalude. How do you do it Ben?! Such riveting storytelling, every.damn.time.
Thanks Kim. I’m glad it’s still working.
Definitely three clicks higher on the tension dial - tortured AND killed? Now I'm really getting worried, Scott and Chris don't seem like they've always got the contestants best interests at heart, and I'm still suspicious of Schultz... Meanwhile, where's Evangeline???
I know, right? Stakes are a lot higher than the chance to win a fancy trailer that composts your poop. Eve shows up next week, not to worry. Thanks for reading, Troy.
Oh boy, I really need Jessie to be ok so that he and Jayden can have a happy ending and Cam can officiate their wedding and Riley can be ring-bearer / head of security.
Great episode, Ben. Never could have imagined that this would be where we’d end up, but I love it...
I’ll do my best to make all of your wishes come true but I can’t make any promises. 😉As always, thanks so much for tuning in and giving your kind feedback.
Ben! You’ve done it again. I was enthralled the entire time. Your storytelling is such an art.
Aw thanks, Holly. 😊 I’m so glad it’s keeping you engaged.
Another awesome episode, Ben. Loved getting the multiple scenes here of Scott and Chris and then back at the house, then the finding of Jessie's phone. Brilliantly done. Tension builds. What's going to happen?? *Bites nails*
Thanks, Nathan! Some of my chapters are so short I have to bundle a couple together to make a good episode length.
Works perfectly! 🤗