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Things are really picking up! All the characters are involved, which makes the story really dynamic. There's no guessing where the story goes from here.

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Ben, thank you for a good long juicy episode! I look forward to Schulz’s reaction, half expecting him to welcome the added attention the videos will surely draw to the game. No such thing as bad publicity, right? 😱😭 As usual, your POV choices worked well.

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This episode of Harmony House is a real nail-biter! 😬 The tension keeps mounting as Jessie and Deepu are in a perilous situation, and now the Jenson brothers and the remaining contestants are caught up in it too. Kudos to you for crafting such a gripping story with believable characters and unexpected twists. I'm totally hooked and can't wait to see how it all unfolds! πŸ“ΊπŸ”

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Feb 9Liked by Ben Wakeman

On the edge of my seat with this one. I need to put my phone down and take a quaalude. How do you do it Ben?! Such riveting storytelling, every.damn.time.

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Feb 8Liked by Ben Wakeman

Definitely three clicks higher on the tension dial - tortured AND killed? Now I'm really getting worried, Scott and Chris don't seem like they've always got the contestants best interests at heart, and I'm still suspicious of Schultz... Meanwhile, where's Evangeline???

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Feb 7Liked by Ben Wakeman

Oh boy, I really need Jessie to be ok so that he and Jayden can have a happy ending and Cam can officiate their wedding and Riley can be ring-bearer / head of security.

Great episode, Ben. Never could have imagined that this would be where we’d end up, but I love it...

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Ben! You’ve done it again. I was enthralled the entire time. Your storytelling is such an art.

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Feb 6Liked by Ben Wakeman

Another awesome episode, Ben. Loved getting the multiple scenes here of Scott and Chris and then back at the house, then the finding of Jessie's phone. Brilliantly done. Tension builds. What's going to happen?? *Bites nails*

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