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Yea! Iโ€™m glad youโ€™re on your toes. I should note that credit goes to you for the terrorists having codenames based on birds. I started writing this chapter a few months back when I was first introduced to your work. ๐Ÿฆ‰

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Didn't see THAT coming! Imma gonna need you to release the next chapter now... Thanks!

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Jan 25Liked by Ben Wakeman

Absolutely fucking wild ๐Ÿ˜ฎ Seriously, you know how to keep us on our toes, Ben!! Come on Tuesday!!

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Jan 25Liked by Ben Wakeman

Love a good eco-terrorist twist!!!! ๐Ÿ‘

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Jan 24Liked by Ben Wakeman

WHAAAAAT!? OMG! This is coconuts! (Is Schultz behind this??? BRILLIANT publicity! ;)

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Jan 24Liked by Ben Wakeman

Whoah!! What a twist. Did *not* see that happening (although was there a hint that someone might have been watching them, long ago? I forget, I could be imagining it. So good, Ben. Quite the turn of events! Hurry up with the next one ๐Ÿ˜‰

Minor note, given it seems like Freja has knowledge of the show, would she know their names? She knows of Jessie's name at one point, but then they are referred to as the old guy and the Indian guy. Hope you don't mind me asking this, it was the only thing that made me pause for a moment here.

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Another thing I havenโ€™t yet mentioned is that your chapter titles are terrific. I love a good title.

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Oh my god, I love a twist! Iโ€™m with Troy! Iโ€™m gonna need the next chapter soon, pretty please. โ™ฅ๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ

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Jan 24Liked by Ben Wakeman

Oh, eco terrorists!!

Didn't see that coming.

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Holy heck, Ben! WTAF?!?! Riveting. I think I was as nervous as Freja, maybe even Deepu. Excuse me while I go change. ๐Ÿ˜ฑ

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Great twist! The story keeps drawing us in deeper.

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WHAT what what what

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